On The Cusp Of The Information Age ([info]sam_storyteller) wrote,
2005-07-11 01:10:00
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Synchronicity, 1 of 3. R.

Sam's fanfiction archive has moved. The story formerly found here may now be found at:

http://sam-storyteller.dreamwidth.org/63682.html

Thank you for your patience!
Tags: house md, r-rating, synchronicity

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[info]freckles42

April 14 2006, 23:46:38 UTC 6 years ago

Love all of this so far!

"What, you've never seen a hostage exchange before?" House asked them.

This made me laugh out loud. *grins*

I can hear them both so clearly in my head, it's uncanny. Awesome.

[info]0x

April 15 2006, 01:46:11 UTC 6 years ago

I'm so glad you wrote this! *goes to next chapter with glee*

[info]gothicauthor

April 15 2006, 03:21:39 UTC 6 years ago

Wilson, because he was that kind of person, dried off his hands and went about making some decaf coffee and a nice plate of snacks.

I cracked up. I mean, seriously. Wilson so totally is that kind of person.

Gothic Author

[info]booklady

April 15 2006, 05:43:19 UTC 6 years ago

That does it. Now I must watch this show. Where do you find your torrents?

[info]sam_storyteller

April 15 2006, 18:21:50 UTC 6 years ago

check the comms I belong to. :)

[info]jtptan

April 15 2006, 11:18:57 UTC 6 years ago

This is great! You got both of their characters spot-on, as usual! I can hear their banter inmy head as if they were saying it.

[info]longleggedgit

April 15 2006, 22:04:06 UTC 6 years ago

Oh, you did NOT make him live on Baker Avenue. Brilliant.

This chapter is already awesome, and I can't wait to reward myself with the next after I accomplish a little more homework. :)

[info]sam_storyteller

April 15 2006, 22:23:37 UTC 6 years ago

In the Hudson apartment complex, don't forget!

I was a Holmes geek way before I was a House geek, and then I was a House geek before I realised it was like this ultra-AU Holmes fanfic, and now I'm just....a really big geek.

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[info]ze_toaster

April 16 2006, 16:49:38 UTC 6 years ago

*dies dead*

This is brilliant. *runs off to read the rest*

[info]jazmin_firewing

April 16 2006, 16:49:50 UTC 6 years ago

*blinks* I don't watch the show, I just love anything that you write, so it came to me as a complete shock what an asshole House is!

[info]sam_storyteller

April 17 2006, 14:16:08 UTC 6 years ago

Oh yes. That's his thing. Assholery. :D

The reason that House is a step up from just a show about a man who shouts a lot, however, is that House always has a reason. He's incredibly intelligent and part of the time it's just that he amuses himself at other peoples' expense because they're being morons. Most of the time, however, he's either trying to teach a lesson or elicit an honest response.

In the first ten episodes or so, for example, he often needles or pesters Cameron about being bad at telling people bad news. He thinks it's because she's lost someone and he finally finds out she's right. Once he finds out WHY she's damaged, he's not interested anymore, and he stops being such an asshole about it.

[info]still_dorothy

April 16 2006, 22:42:21 UTC 6 years ago

Wow! My first ever "House" fic. You have these characters down pat. Very well done.

I am sure glad I stumbled across this, and you. I enjoy your writing style, and your attention to detail. You showcase Greg's sarcasm without overdoing it.

*skips off to chappy two*

[info]gaffsie

April 24 2006, 09:16:19 UTC 6 years ago

What a fun story! I love the way you write Wilson/House banter, your amusing character descriptions, everything. :)

[info]mad_march_hare

April 25 2006, 15:29:51 UTC 6 years ago

South Fifth and Baker, near the Hudson apartment complex.

*squees aloud*

*roommate looks at me funny*

*loves you for Holmesian references*

[info]sam_storyteller

April 25 2006, 16:47:29 UTC 6 years ago

:D :D :D

[info]green_queen

April 28 2006, 13:13:31 UTC 6 years ago

I'm terrified of bugs. Not spiders, though.

I am loving this but I will have better comments at the end of the next chapter.

[info]nogah

May 5 2006, 01:00:03 UTC 6 years ago

If I was queen, you would write the script for real.

[info]thirdblindmouse

May 29 2006, 03:39:21 UTC 5 years ago

"It's the Porsche or we stand here and if you hit my other leg with your cane I'm going to take it and beat you into submission with it and then take your keys," Wilson said firmly. House narrowed his eyes.

Heh. Butch Wilson. Me likee.

Anonymous

June 18 2006, 23:01:31 UTC 5 years ago

Did you know about the season two finale when you wrote this? Because if not, well done with the guess about House getting shot by an irate patient.

[info]sam_storyteller

June 19 2006, 02:28:58 UTC 5 years ago

*laughs* alas, I did have preknowledge. I had read a spoiler about it.

[info]red_coffeecup

November 24 2006, 20:55:40 UTC 5 years ago

You're a doctor!"

House pulled the lever on the door, but he told himself it was only because there was no way Wilson was getting the last word. "I'm a diagnostician! What do you want me to do, look at them and say yep, they're dead?"

*dies*
That was the best part! Well, one of the best parts....excuse me as I go and read the rest.....so good....SO good....

Anonymous

February 22 2007, 07:32:10 UTC 5 years ago

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NSU - 4efer, 5210 - rulez
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[info]lorna26

June 14 2007, 03:26:13 UTC 4 years ago

Eau de woe. Lmao.

[info]sam_storyteller

June 14 2007, 12:16:31 UTC 4 years ago

Thanks! :D

[info]raiining

December 5 2007, 02:15:21 UTC 4 years ago

Wilson managed to prop himself on his elbows, but that really only gave him a better vantage point from which to stare down in shock.

Awesome.

.. reading on!

[info]raveninthewind

February 8 2008, 16:47:07 UTC 4 years ago

I rec'd this story here:
http://raveninthewind.livejournal.com/755413.html

[info]sam_storyteller

February 8 2008, 16:52:52 UTC 4 years ago

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Anonymous

March 18 2009, 19:52:15 UTC 3 years ago

"You're not easy," he said. "You're not simple. You change. I don't know what's going on in your head, I don't know what you're going to say next. It's a fucking relief, not having to fake being interested when I know everything everyone's going to say."

"Your ego certainly isn't suffering," Wilson replied, but his heart wasn't in it.

"I'm crying on the inside," House answered. He turned his head to stare out the window again. "People suck. They think there's this way they're supposed to act, and they do, and then they're miserable."

"Common courtesy isn't -- "

"I'm not talking about saying thank you and holding doors," House snarled. Wilson lifted an eyebrow. "It's this stupid -- like everything's a game of what the right thing to say is, except an idiot invented the rules -- mmh." He sat up and drank the last of his Coke. "It's not worth the time it would take to explain."

Thank you for expressing what's extremely frustrating about people in general. It's blasted well next to impossible to live a day and encounter more than 2 real people. I suppose that makes the ones we do find all the more priceless. And how like House to recognize this and recognize Wilson's genuineness - and how like Wilson to be ignorant of his own realness. :) Thank you, Sam.

-an appreciative reader

[info]sam_storyteller

March 22 2009, 14:51:38 UTC 3 years ago

You're welcome! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I always get frustrated with the game too :)
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